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Pilgrimage
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0 posted 2004-10-01 12:43 PM



Smell the old year die,
hear the rattle of his breath
riding a damp wind.


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Kristabell
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1 posted 2004-10-01 01:00 PM


Very nice.
Pilgrimage
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2 posted 2004-10-01 01:03 PM


Thanks, Kristabell.

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3 posted 2004-10-01 06:47 PM


enjoyed!
this will be a good one to post again in late December

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4 posted 2004-10-01 09:38 PM


Nan~



I just LOVE the picture this paints~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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5 posted 2004-10-02 11:19 AM


Death rattle or snore....
The big death or the small one,
Only Spring can know.

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6 posted 2004-10-02 12:46 PM


awesome!
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