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Dictation of My Heart
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Dictation of My Heart |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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Dictation of My Heart A love song… Perhaps… A sonnet…a composition… What then…What should it be…? A masterpiece from the heart of an amateur… How might I go about this thing… My heart, shy and faltering, does not speak clearly through my lips… I must leave this part of me to my fingers… Only this time, even they, my tried and true, fail to convey what my heart dictates… If my fingers would just stop stuttering… I would draw a picture of magnificent wonder! I would paint the skyline in magenta hue! What manner of love can my hands convey while my stumbling heart keeps silent my voice… This vibrant emotion could never be spoken— could never be uttered with satisfaction… A poetic genius could not voice the colors of this love! But to make it speak through my hands, can I? Can I truly spell out the words-- One letter at a time, one color, one moment, One…one thing at a time to say… Oh to say! Simply and completely With all of me— Every mortal speck of me… This love I have explodes for you! Was made only for you! This…if only I could say…but I can’t— Can I? If only my fingers would stop stuttering… dgvarner 09/30/04 "Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..." B. Adams |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a very pretty write...enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very beautifully penned. It's so good to read you again.. and this...this is so honest and open..love it! Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG ... DG ... DG~ Oh my ... this is as lovely as anything you've ever left for us to find~ Love just looks SO good on ya' gal~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hey lady, I've sure missed you around here. And this, is a heart flow, the passionate search for the right words. Good to read your heartbeat again. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
LeeJ..thank you--glad you enjoyed! Enchantress..Thanks a bunch, so good to be read again! Miss Margie..you're so sweet..thank you thank you! Midnitesun..Many thanks to you too! (you snuck in there!) This is my b-day present to me..I haven't felt the responses from the blue in a while..its time! hugs, g "Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..." B. Adams |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
HAPPY BIRTHDAY SWEET POET! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sometimes I just close my eyes and type without knowing what is coming out. I really like the way you convey your thoughts here. When you can pull the reader in to the point where they can feel or see what it is you are saying, then you succeed in your write. This poem does that quite well. Much enjoyed. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Happy Birthday!!! And a fine write too boot. Much enjoyed the read. coyote  |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
Mark..I know, sometimes I write rather blindfolded too! That's pretty much what this was...just let the fingers do the speaking! Thanks for reading! Coyote..Thank you! Midnitesun..thanks for the good wishes! hugs, g |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Bursting with emotion, and passion...lovely sentiments. Robert Joseph |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
I thank you, Robert hugs, g "Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw) |
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