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choshi
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0 posted 2004-10-01 09:36 AM







Where is your fullness,
oh half-moon beneath the limbs?
You tarry in her sky-
beyond the vast horizon
so we may gaze together.

[This message has been edited by choshi (10-02-2004 08:43 AM).]

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-10-01 11:08 AM


my goodness, how pretty!!!

Thank you for sharing

Enchantress
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2 posted 2004-10-01 11:37 AM


Beautiful...
both the words and the picture.
Very much enjoyed!!
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Pilgrimage
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3 posted 2004-10-01 12:45 PM


Oh that's lovely.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2004-10-01 11:18 PM


Where is your fullness,
oh half-moon beneath the limbs?
You tarry in her sky-
beyond the vast horizon
so we may gaze together.
************************************

within one sky
two hearts
beat in sync

filling
the gap
between
the distance

healing
the wounded moon.


iliana
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5 posted 2004-10-01 11:57 PM


Hi, Paul   I've just got a little time tonight to read and couldn't resist one of your beautifies!  Thanks for the view....*hugs* ......jo
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6 posted 2004-10-02 08:43 AM


gently smiling

calming

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2004-10-02 10:30 AM


missed reading you...

glad I have a little time here today

choshi
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8 posted 2004-10-02 10:53 AM


missed reading you...

glad I have a little time here today


Awww, Dixie, you are sweet.....I was wondering how you have been with the bad weather and all...My time has been limited also...   ~P

choshi
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9 posted 2004-10-02 10:54 AM


Dear Dawn,

Smiling along with you [gently]     ~P

choshi
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10 posted 2004-10-02 10:55 AM


Hi, Paul   I've just got a little time tonight to read and couldn't resist one of your beautifies!  Thanks for the view....*hugs* ......jo


Hi Jo, I know the feeling of being under time-pressure ...thank you for your kind comment.....   Back ....~P

choshi
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11 posted 2004-10-02 10:57 AM


Where is your fullness,
oh half-moon beneath the limbs?
You tarry in her sky-
beyond the vast horizon
so we may gaze together.
************************************

within one sky
two hearts
beat in sync

filling
the gap
between
the distance

healing
the wounded moon.

~~~~~~~<@>~~~~~~
Between passing clouds,
the hazy white moon lingers
in the daytime sky.

Thank you Michele for your sweet response...

choshi
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12 posted 2004-10-02 10:59 AM


Thank you , Lee J , Enchantress, Pilgrimage ...for your warm comments...I am glad you enjoyed this piece   ~P
JamesMichael
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13 posted 2004-10-03 10:04 PM


Enjoyed...James
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14 posted 2004-10-03 10:17 PM


as usual, both poem and picture were a delight
Margherita
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15 posted 2004-10-04 05:22 PM


Margherita the moongazer loves this romantic piece and enjoys the picture!

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