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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-10-01 07:53 AM


Mambo

The bar stool spread a leather lap
The beer was cold right from the tap
The lights were low and warm in glow
And there she danced a hips mambo

I beat my fingers on the bar
My body rippled like hot tar
I rose in rhythm from my seat
And slowly moved to mambos heat

My feet lead straight across the floor
My body moved in senseless awe
Her eyes met mine in flaming heat
We danced and rubbed to mambos beat

Our moves were like volcanoes rumble
Lava on the brink of tumble
Sweat moved down her neck and breast
And mine rolled down my hairy chest

We held each other in embrace
Without a word we left the place



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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2004-10-01 08:13 AM


Now Sey, you went and made me smile with this one.     very well done sir,
happy Friday to you!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-10-01 08:36 AM


Sy!  Oh myyyy..I think maybe I put a little extra something in your tea!
It's a little early in the day..but can you please put me on your dance card?
We'll mambo away!
~Morning mambo hugs to you sigh guy~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
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right...there
3 posted 2004-10-01 08:39 AM


Sy you really know how to mambo!!!  

believe in what your heart feels...

Kahlil
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4 posted 2004-10-01 08:43 AM


May I be next??????
whew!!!

K

LeeJ
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5 posted 2004-10-01 08:54 AM


Grinning....

would ya save the last dance for me?

Morning kiddo...

Nice read!

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2004-10-01 11:19 AM


The bar stool spread a leather lap
The beer was cold right from the tap
The lights were low and warm in glow
And there she danced a hips mambo

I beat my fingers on the bar
My body rippled like hot tar
I rose in rhythm from my seat
And slowly moved to mambos heat

My feet lead straight across the floor
My body moved in senseless awe
Her eyes met mine in flaming heat
We danced and rubbed to mambos beat

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WOOOOOOO HOOOOOOO and Yowzers!!!
I dont think I have any pics to go with this one..LOL
Now thats the Roar of a Randy Dragon.
Bout time you fired that boyyyeeeee up. LOL
The congo beat has got nothing on your cadence Sybabers...this was a sweet raspberry treat to read aloud...you give rhyme a beat and passion a groove with this hottie gem. I'll be dancing the mambo with bubble wrap today..LOL Lots more unpacking to do. Starting on the office and guest rooms...but wanted to stop in and send you and Randy some winkies.


Martie
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7 posted 2004-10-01 02:29 PM


Sy

Mambo!  That used to be one of my favoite dances...and great exercise too!  Enjoyed your rendition!  

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
8 posted 2004-10-01 03:58 PM


Gentle Spirit
Thank you sweet, glad you enjoyed.

Nancy
I'm sure it was the tea. LOL

scorpio
Glad you enjoyed the read.

Kahlil
Why of course.

LeeJ
You got it, LOL

JM
That was Randy, he must have snuck out of the house.


Martie
Enjoyed the telling. LOL

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
9 posted 2004-10-01 04:55 PM


Talk about in the heat of the night.  Sounds like one heck of a dance and I am stuck here only knowing how to two step.  Hey what can ya expect from a cowboy? lol  Very nice write sir and it glided across these eyes as smooth as the floor on which you dance.  Much enjoyed.
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
10 posted 2004-10-01 05:31 PM


Mark,
You know a two step can be pretty sexy. LOL

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