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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-09-30 07:09 PM



There you were,
as always
walking my mind,
creating a new path
straight to my heart
in the silence of the night,
where only the rhythm of the lost
emptied into a yesterday of tomorrows~

Fading into morning
growing stronger in meaning
but oh so weary from the journey,
I may search for the voice from within
that remembers and feel the gentleness
of a new day, and ponder
...what lays ahead~~

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-09-30 07:59 PM


Thoughts to ponder - may soft journey and a true path lay ahead -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Larry C
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since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286
United States
2 posted 2004-09-30 08:02 PM


M,
That was one of my favorites. I love it when you look ahead without forgetting the past.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

3 posted 2004-09-30 08:05 PM


where only the rhythm of the lost
emptied into a yesterday of tomorrows~


loved these lines M~  beautiful.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
4 posted 2004-09-30 09:38 PM


I do that, too. Hope you are doing well.
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-09-30 10:54 PM


"I may search for the voice from within
that remembers and feel the gentleness
of a new day, and ponder
...what lays ahead~~"

Yes..the gentleness of a new day...
Good to see you looking ahead M.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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