The gathering(with a tip to Martie)

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Open Poetry #33

The gathering(with a tip to Martie)

kayjay
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0 posted 2004-09-30 09:05 AM

Light's a gathering
Hiding us from the darkness
Which is everywhere

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-09-30 09:15 AM

Excellent one Ken!
Much enjoyed the morning read.
~Smiles, hugs and luv, Nancy~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2004-09-30 09:18 AM

excellent morning read Ken. Enjoyed this very much.

Martie

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3 posted 2004-09-30 10:34 AM

Ken

I like...glad to have helped inspire this! Sometimes we take small things forgranted unless we allow ourselves to look at them differently.

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-09-30 11:31 AM

yes

Midnitesun

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Gaia

5 posted 2004-09-30 11:43 AM

Enjoying this gathering for a morning light show.

miscellanea
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6 posted 2004-09-30 08:47 PM

Nice! This gives such hope and a cozy feeling.

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Light's a gathering
Hiding us from the darkness
Which is everywhere

Larry C

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7 posted 2004-09-30 10:58 PM

Good. But Martie doesn't need any tips...she's already a good writer.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

kayjay
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8 posted 2004-09-30 11:32 PM

Larry, that was not meant to be advice to Martie, but a tip of the hat! I'd never presume to try to improve HER writing! Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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