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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-09-30 07:59 AM



circle sigh shivers
whirlwind with lace
and eye sides glance

I sip the wine
of a jaguar perversion
and my beard is wax then

you knock on my stones
and finger prick the locks
begging for salvation

you say lighthouse backwards
and turn them off
with the windows open

when morning hears you sing
I am the ink on your back
riding low in your saddle

and you are water song poems  
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Dark

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-09-30 08:30 AM


reading you is like watching a movie
with glowing metaphors of human emotion
Cool!

Good Morning
Wishing you a grrrr8 Day!


Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2004-09-30 08:37 AM


  Morning without your words just wouldn't seem right....grinz....as always Dark one, I enjoyed the visions...

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-09-30 10:46 AM


Mmmmm - bathing in the visions stirred here-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Martie
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4 posted 2004-09-30 10:50 AM


DS

"you say lighthouse backwards"

I tried to do this, but couldn't.

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
5 posted 2004-09-30 10:53 AM


PS....saying lighthouse backwards is

house light

winking as the plot thickens

thanks to all of you for your reviews


passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-09-30 11:25 AM


a wow write
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with you
7 posted 2004-09-30 01:23 PM


you know I am keeping this one, right??
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