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~K~
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since 2004-07-27
Posts 148


0 posted 2004-09-30 07:23 AM



There is no end
to this path
where we connect
still lines blur
on further
inspection
this
strain
infects
to promote
our
perfection
outside the wall
it all falls
like they predicted
in kaleidoscope
fashion
we enter
tomorrow

© Copyright 2004 ~K~ - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-09-30 07:46 AM


I love it!

Great imagery and perspective!

Love, Margherita

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2004-09-30 07:48 AM


Wow!  What a way to enter into tomorrow!  I enjoyed your words and will be looking for more from you.  

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

littlewing
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3 posted 2004-10-02 04:49 PM


Morrison would have loved this, K


Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2004-10-03 12:01 PM


very nice rhythmic flow, K
Robert Joseph
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5 posted 2004-10-03 06:49 AM


Invoking thought and contemplation in this reader's mind. Thanks for sharing!

Robert Joseph

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
6 posted 2004-10-04 10:54 PM


there is always something haphazard about discovery and progression...

and youve written of it beautifully...

"in kaleidoscope fashion"
you know thats an awesome line

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