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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-09-29 03:32 PM


Sweet Dreams


Music whispers sweet dreams
Long passions, walks, hills
Sweeping passion images calling
Windswept trees breezing to a torpid day
To drift
Long grass
A moment away
From sublime pleasure
Spinning wood inspired
To fragrant desire
Of peace
Courtesy of a day
A small pond milling in a lake
Fishing for compliments
Of busy Ducks
Fishing
For compliments
And a passion
For a day

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miscellanea
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OH
1 posted 2004-09-29 04:09 PM


Impressive, Dave!
           miscellanea

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-09-29 08:07 PM


Like this -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Bonnie j
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3 posted 2004-09-29 09:04 PM


Eyes close
Drifting on peaceful words of poetry.
Lovely
BonBon

DavePage
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4 posted 2004-10-11 06:23 PM


miscellanea

Thanks

I did write some soft stuff at one point, but at the time no-one really wanted to know about it.

It was nice to give it an airing.

Dave

Susan

Yes, and maybe on a dreamy summer's day at rest.

dave

Bonnie j
          
Thanks Bonnie - yes you are right

Dave


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