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Susan
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walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-09-29 03:07 PM



I was meant to wander
To dance upon floral lea
Waltzing hand-n-hand with rainbows
In time to starshine rhapsody

My spirit was born free
Shimmering with pixie dust
Burning with fairy light fire
Softened by dew kissed mist

My heart was made for giving
Granting rose petal wishes
And dandelion dreams
Loves fragrant essence cast upon breeze

Won’t you come along?
Join me in gypsy steps and tambourine song
Come to know the moon and the sun
And the Bohemian in Me

s.a.t.


Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

[This message has been edited by Susan (09-29-2004 05:21 PM).]

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2004-09-29 03:15 PM


joining you in this beautiful song and dance Susan!  Lovely write.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Margherita
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2 posted 2004-09-29 05:13 PM


My spirit was born free
Shimmering with pixie dust
Burning with fairy light fire
Softened by dew kissed mist


Just so!
Very beautiful .... and gladly I join!
Love, Margherita

Susan
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3 posted 2004-09-29 05:22 PM


Lovely to have both or your company - shall we put posies in our hair and go about barefoot?

Hugs -   Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

DavePage
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4 posted 2004-09-29 07:42 PM


Yes

I only wear socks because things love my ankles

Dave

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5 posted 2004-09-29 11:26 PM


the dance is beautiful....

~~*~~
Read between the lines
look deep into each word
and you will understand the
depth of my soul (GE)
~~**~~

Martie
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6 posted 2004-09-29 11:28 PM


Susan

I enjoyed this bohemian of you!

Susan
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7 posted 2004-09-30 12:55 PM


Dave - I don't blame you - socks are for winter in the house to keep the footsies warm - otherwise, who needs 'em.

Greeneyes, thank you for dancing with me

Martie - free spirits, yes?  Joyful.  Thank you.  

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
8 posted 2004-09-30 01:39 AM



Waltzing hand-n-hand with rainbows
In time to starshine rhapsody
-----------------
Granting rose petal wishes
And dandelion dreams
-------------------

and what better way to spread them than
-------------------

Loves fragrant essence cast upon breeze
-------------------

a breeze from free spirited breath maybe?

So much enjoyed and took me back to days I so well remember.  Excellent read.


Robert Joseph
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9 posted 2004-09-30 05:44 AM


Join me in gypsy steps and tambourine song
Come to know the moon and the sun
And the Bohemian in Me
   Creating wonderful, and lively images...this one works so well for me.

      Robert Joseph

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2004-09-30 08:00 AM


without polish
bare stone
with the light just right

eye candy suggestion

kewl stuff ms

~K~
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11 posted 2004-09-30 09:02 AM


sticky sweet.
Enchantress
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12 posted 2004-09-30 09:08 AM


"Won’t you come along?
Join me in gypsy steps and tambourine song
Come to know the moon and the sun
And the Bohemian in Me"

Ah how I would love to Susan!
And...I happen to have a tambourine handy!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Susan
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13 posted 2004-09-30 10:44 AM


Smiling - thank you friends for your kind replies - my heart is warmed.

Nancy - tambourine - kewl, I've got ribbons for our hair and bells for our toes, let's go play dear lady

Hugs all -  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2004-09-30 11:11 AM


couldn't help but revisit the gypsy melody I hear when I read this...
twice lovely Susan...

Susan
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15 posted 2004-09-30 02:32 PM


Thanks Donna -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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