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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-09-29 09:33 AM



I had you there

on the edge of a moment.

Could feel the sharpness of thought

and the curve of understanding.

Only then did I believe...


M

*thanking a poet's location*
"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Larry C
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1 posted 2004-09-29 09:35 AM


Cool M! I like that.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2004-09-29 09:43 AM


The awareness of a split second ....
beautiful, Maureen!

Love, Margherita

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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3 posted 2004-09-29 09:47 AM


an "edge of a moment"...

   Enjoyed, Maureen.
      
                 miscellanea

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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4 posted 2004-09-29 10:23 AM


the magic of faith, in the oak of your words
tremendous views you give

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