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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
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0 posted 2004-09-29 08:16 AM


whispers on water
gypsy mouths
sipping sky
then wearing night
as indigo invisible

my eyes miss her skin
when she was at rincon
with her funny shoes
and made the wet sounds
with her eyes

she was delores
with out sadness
a phone book photo
on every page
of her cellophane

we are older trees now
but still entwine
under the earth
with our fingers
where the sky doesn't see

in dreams indigo is me


_______________

Dark


[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (09-29-2004 10:13 AM).]

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-09-29 08:39 AM


Full Lenth Gown of love, something to be devoured, when in the bestest of company
thank you for this leap into a magical place, full of gift music

Smiles and hugs

Good good morning Mr.  How r u?

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2004-09-29 08:51 AM


Dark,
Reads like an alter ego dance to me. Enjoyed

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-09-29 09:59 AM


You wrap me in a cloak of beauty with your words - indigo - what a beautiful sound.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

4 posted 2004-09-29 09:24 PM


is this what it sounds like
when a dove cries?

K

Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2004-09-29 10:01 PM


*sigh* I too, have some Rincon memories, and you've stirred them up once again, my friend.
The warm caress of golden sunsets, watching dolphins jump and play, dancing waves teasing my feet within silvery midnight sands...


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