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Harvest Moon [2 Waka]
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Harvest Moon [2 Waka] |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
 If I fail to come, |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
awesome  |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
Paul, youve been gone a long while...but you certainly came back with a huge impact. sensual, inviting..... im awestruck.  nice to see you! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Paul...softly sensual and very beautiful! Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I was glad to see your name--your poetry is always so exquisite. Take for example the first waka. It involves one right away "If I fail to come, please blame it on the mist" I liked the second waka, too, but the first was exceptional! Enjoyed. miscellanea |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PaulPaulPaul~ This is BEAUTIFUL !!!! Can you hear the *sighs* from down Florida way ? Last evening as I stood out in the yard, I saw the mist-in-move across the moon~ You've written it soooooooooo well~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
loverly music...enjoyed |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you sly fox you.......i knew you had it in you...  and yes i liked mucho |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh, this is such a soft sensual moon write  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
both are lovely! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this is just beautiful |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Two very beautiful full of passion. Much enjoyed. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
fantastic words chosi |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Paul, youve been gone a long while...but you certainly came back with a huge impact. sensual, inviting..... im awestruck. nice to see you! Thank you Dawn, ....and it is very nice to see you too... back at you ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Beautiful Paul...softly sensual and very beautiful! Hugs~ Thank you Nancy, glad you like ... back.....~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
I was glad to see your name--your poetry is always so exquisite. Take for example the first waka. It involves one right away "If I fail to come, please blame it on the mist" I liked the second waka, too, but the first was exceptional! Enjoyed. miscellanea Aww, Thank you Cathy, you are very perceptive ... The first poem flowed right out, the second one doesn't feel quite as immediate or even "finished" -if one ever is....Glad you enjoyed ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
This is BEAUTIFUL !!!! Can you hear the *sighs* from down Florida way ? Last evening as I stood out in the yard, I saw the mist-in-move across the moon~ ....Oh my , Marge, and I thought that was the hurricane winds Thank you for your kind comments....Good to hear from you and I am hoping that you are safe and sound.... back at you .....~P |
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