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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-09-29 03:11 AM



Better

I remember better
it was
a blackberry time
and the thing
that stained you
was sweet

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart



© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 2004-09-29 05:11 AM


Oooh I reallyyyy like this slick_lady

Maree

Well I see you doing, What I try to do for me, With the words from a poet, And a voice from a choir, And a melody, nothing else matters. ~Stevie Nicks

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-09-29 05:43 AM


you always say so much with so few words

love that about you

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3 posted 2004-10-02 11:11 AM


Ooh....tasty! I'll bet it was exactly that!

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Ericc
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4 posted 2004-10-02 03:30 PM


Excellent write Helen!

Eric

littlewing
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5 posted 2004-10-02 07:00 PM


OH, this is amazing, Helen!

perfect!

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