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September Smoke
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September Smoke |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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September Smoke it would be a lie if I didn’t say I was on the edge of something where even breath refuses to stay in my lungs utterances of deceptions has caused angry echoes in a bottomless cavern yet, I long to be on the ground where you are my skin has been unzipped and I find I am – exposed I do not want to be right for there is no bonus in losing all I want is, to be but again, I got too close to an uncontrollable raging fire and all that is left is the burn and a scar that will never fade just some words cut out |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sizzling isn't always fun, is it?  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*understanding this*  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, a dangerous raging fire. A psycho write .... so well done! Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
can see you there with mirrors looking back at you and they all smile as friends |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady Try a little cream of the day, enjoyed the read. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlick~ 'I do not want to be right for there is no bonus in losing' Oh, oh, oh ... I have known this smoke and survived to extinguish the fire~ *HUGLETS*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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