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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-09-29 12:42 PM


South Shores

Waves were good on
the south shores today,
I met a surfer girl
in betweeen six foot waves.
She caught a nice wave in,
yelling catch me if you can.
Close to shore, college boys
yelled happy cries, as her
bikini top fell off as
she was surfing by.
I snatched it from the
water while I followed her in.
As I was returning her top,
curiosity about her tan line
and my admiring eyes found
two good reasons to stop.

JamesLee
September28
2004
Occasionally the waves are
good on the south shores.

© Copyright 2004 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 2004-09-29 05:16 AM


The flow of this gently rolled down to this southern shore

Enjoyed JamesMichael

Maree

Well I see you doing, What I try to do for me, With the words from a poet, And a voice from a choir, And a melody, nothing else matters. ~Stevie Nicks

MGROVES
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2 posted 2004-09-29 05:36 AM


sounds like a good day and a good view
good for you


Margherita
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3 posted 2004-09-29 06:08 AM


Surfing in bikini seems somehow unsafe ... safe for James' eyes!
Lovely!
Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2004-09-30 12:15 PM


Thank you Dark Angel, MGROVES and Margherita...if I didn't look I would have to kick myself later...James
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