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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
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0 posted 2004-09-28 07:31 PM




Just A Little Bit Mended

Our paths parted almost a decade ago.
My love for you deep, all encompassing, full surrender.
In debt, recovering from the loss of an ill parent.
You were my light in a storm.
You came when I was filled with exhaustion and pain.
Your love of music filled me with peaceful tranquility.
You caressing, with long gentle fingers, an acoustic collage
of melodic melodies of the guitar.
The magic you did weave, as I sat and melted into the
liquid message of your stroking minstrel melody.
Moving ahead with my life-
Taking the time to heal from another painful tribulation.
Leaving you behind-
Never to see your beautiful smile and sparkling
laughing eyes.
Never to hear your voice, your laughter or to hear your
mesmerizing music.
After all these years you have entered my heart once again.
I hear your weeping guitar melodies and my heart aches for your
loving touch of serenity.
To see you smile and hear your laughter, just for a moment.
Oh! How I do miss you kind sir.
How I miss your humorous jokes filling me with laughter
and your light-hearted happiness.
After all these years, here are the tears once again,
and that old familiar ache within my saddened heart.
My heart broken, just a little bit mended.

Love
BonBon

[This message has been edited by Bonnie j (09-28-2004 09:09 PM).]

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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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1 posted 2004-09-28 08:07 PM


Bonnie

The magic in your heart means the magic in your eyes and your sense

Flow

Dave

DavePage
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2 posted 2004-09-28 08:14 PM


I read your words again Bonnie

I didn't say how good
they were

They are good

Dave

Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
3 posted 2004-09-28 09:11 PM


Thank you Dave for reading. Glad you enjoyed.
See Ya
Bonnie


klm
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since 2004-09-07
Posts 58
New Orleans, Atlanta
4 posted 2004-09-28 09:19 PM


liquid words.

kenneth

The true poet writes to express, not impress.

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5 posted 2004-10-03 01:17 PM


OhBonnie~
How very tender is this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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