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Margherita
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0 posted 2004-09-28 11:54 AM






***

Lifted up


Notes of pan flutes
reach like hands of light
and I am lifted up
to transcendent planes.

Each single sound
caresses my soul
in a sweet ritual
of awakening.

With every letting go
I climb a rung higher
on the ladder of gold
that brings me closer to You.

There is that field of love
where we flow into each other
giving birth to a new spark
sacred and divine.

Everlasting is the light
generated by love,
we keep it alive
with every single breath.

Come, join me in the field of love,
let yourself be lifted up.
Listen to the sacred tunes,
bare your own powerful spark.

...... and get ready
to merge with the Light.
Surrender to love’s magic
in this full moon night!

***

Love, Margherita

© Copyright 2004 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-09-28 12:38 PM


WOW! this is a beauty, Margherita. A keeper. :sueprgrin:
And I love pan flute music, it is always uplifting for me.

DavePage
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2 posted 2004-09-28 12:48 PM


Loved your magic words Margherita and an honest supplicant at the feet of talent offers his humble offering of something I hope you won't mind echoing your pan's pipes


Dave

A silver note
Acknowledged your ability
Dancing in your eyes

Echoing a vision
Seeking it’s end
Dancing in the sunlight

Kissing every crystal
Moon
Of it’s delight
  

miscellanea
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3 posted 2004-09-28 01:07 PM


Margherita,
   Your writing is majestic!  Inspirational!
It is a privelege to read your poetry and the wonderful responses of others.  

   hugs and love,
    miscellanea

miscellanea
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4 posted 2004-09-28 01:08 PM


Whoops--I meant to place this in my library!
Enjoyed!

Margherita
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5 posted 2004-09-28 04:31 PM


Thank you dear Kacy, Dave and misc, you are all highly uplifting!
Dave, I'm happy that you were inspired to share your own magical words!
My friends, I have been lucky enough to see the huge rising full moon while driving home this evening. It hovered in full splendour above the Eternal City and its color was red/pink/yellow, just mystically beautiful!

The moon gazed at me
sharing its message of love
and I sighed in awe


Love and Joy.
Margherita


klm
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6 posted 2004-09-28 09:42 PM


looking at the same moon, though miles apart. beautiful.

The true poet writes to express, not impress.

Sunshine
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7 posted 2004-09-28 10:00 PM


OH dear, the magic of a full moon...
let it shine and lift you...

this is absolutely a of a poem...

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...

inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2004-09-28 10:36 PM



There is that field of love
where we flow into each other
giving birth to a new spark
sacred and divine.


the flow is bliss, but seems to come too infrequently , but then again, it wouldnt be so divine if it came all the time

Enchantress
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9 posted 2004-09-28 10:40 PM


How very very beautiful Margherita..
Lovely this..lovely you.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

passing shadows
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10 posted 2004-09-29 05:42 AM


full moon...yes

beautiful!

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11 posted 2004-09-29 06:46 AM


very beautiful


LeeJ
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12 posted 2004-09-29 10:15 AM


...... and get ready
to merge with the Light.
Surrender to love’s magic
in this full moon night!
astounding images here, positive and moving as is the poetess who writes such warmth we've come ot expect when we click on your name.

superb writing which to me, holds close reality in a non fiction world.

Thank you

Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2004-09-29 11:13 AM


Margherita~
Oh dear lady ... how lovely this is~
How beautifully the moon bathed you in word-light~

Big Florida *sighs* resonate~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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14 posted 2004-09-29 11:49 AM


this is pure poetic beauty!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Margherita
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15 posted 2004-09-30 09:10 AM


Thank you all!
You are so generous.
Wishing you beautiful days, full of great inspiration.
Love, Margherita

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