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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2004-09-28 08:04 AM


knuckles popcorn
their bubblewrap echos
salty slice of panting
mouth wet with dry on the side

another set of pretend atlas
another ant with size 13 shoes
and dog sounds gnawing
tom sings she's a lady

she says she hates dresses
but wears them on occasion
when her legs need to show
for some interview

with a bald head man
and paper fingers

says she don't dance much
but if I want to arm wrestle
or work on the pontiac
she has her own tools

and gives good massage
or we can go out fighting
says that is sex or better
when you break something

that the other guy couldn't
and make him wish he was a girl
so he could just cry instead
of getting up again

and that guys are such babies
when they bleed and do I like thai

_____________ Dark


scribble note.....and she couldn't kickstart the hog...na nana nana, but I did borrow a couple of her levi shirts ....

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2004-09-28 08:07 AM


smiling at the images you leave us this morning....maybe she just didnt know how to get that motor purring??     Loved this...

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Sunshine
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2 posted 2004-09-28 08:40 AM


Your imagery is always cast with noir shadows...

enjoyed this very much...
and I especially like the scribble notes.

LeeJ
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3 posted 2004-09-28 09:36 AM


grinning, liked this one very much...
Good Morning to ya lad, and how are ye this morn?  Wishin ya a grand day, and top of the mornin DS....

Susan
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walking the surreal
4 posted 2004-09-28 10:20 AM


I love it when you show your petulant side
So there!

Smiling at you this morning - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Skyfire
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Riding
5 posted 2004-09-28 11:58 AM


Enjoyed very much

and then He created the horse...

Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2004-09-28 12:27 PM


LOL, at your scrib sheet.
I couldn't jump start one either.

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