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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2004-09-27 10:25 PM



Cannot find the final answer
have so many choices to make
among so many interests, passions
no one door seems to be the right one
the key I inherited fits more than one
and I am teased by them
that they take wing
chased towards keyholes
to find the correct fit
only master locksmiths know...

Through that keyhole
I allowed myself the pleasure
of a good fictional read
but my roots are non-ficiton
am I then indecisive?
Clearly with a wide cultural base
one can be decisive in his choice,
that may be confusion for the selective...
but that is their imperfection...
Oh my, have I been but betrayed
that I did not choose a singular route
but decided on a plurality of interests?

When you spread yourself too thin
you may wonder where you have been,
but if you spread yourself too thick
does that make life experience stick?



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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2004-09-28 05:21 AM


When you spread yourself too thin
you may wonder where you have been,
but if you spread yourself too thick
does that make life experience stick?


Martin, this speaks to me

M

Ethan Halo
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on the roof again
2 posted 2004-09-28 06:00 AM


insightful conclusion...

it's bittersweet to realize, after reading this, that the choices and opprotunities we have don't get any easier as we get older.

this comforts and discomforts me at the same time. guess that makes me indecisive...

it's not that the future is near or far...
the future's just so grim.

DavePage
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3 posted 2004-09-28 01:25 PM


Sequential or lateral has always been the choice

More multi-talented people fair than those who are single-minded as they have a single mind

Ask yourself as you walk out of a door - do you see a door or everything in between

Yes I like your words but I almost felt you had gone far deeper than you chose, but a lot of people do make the lateral choice and fail because a sequential thinker will go straight thru them

Dave

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4 posted 2004-09-28 02:21 PM


no one door seems to be the right one
the key I inherited fits more than one
and I am teased by them
that they take wing
chased towards keyholes
to find the correct fit
only master locksmiths know...


What I love the most about reading you is I am always left with something to ponder...
your writing makes me look deep, and search....
I enjoy your writing very much.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2004-09-28 02:39 PM


I think it's wonderful that to hold a key that unlocks many doors, providing multiple opportunities.
But you are right, Martin, multiple choices can overwhelm. I understand this indecisiveness predicament, having spent most of my life unlocking as many doors as possible, yet not finding many I wanted to walk through without keeping an eye on the exit. And I keep a tight hold on that key.

ecrivan
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6 posted 2004-09-28 10:39 PM


Dave,

After pondering your statement "but a lot of people do make the lateral choice and fail because a sequential thinker will go straight thru them"... I think you'll agree that the failure of the lateral thinker, if there is one, isn't necessarily because he's taken a circuitous route but because even though the world is filled with prerequisites to get from A to B, getting to B is more often gained not by acquiring knowledge but by making the necessary contacts. The key is in the use of the contacts that a sequential or lateral thinker might make use of independant of their method of approach. Generally lateral thinking opens up new avenues of choice that a sequential thinker can only envy.


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