navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #33 » In Our Sky
Open Poetry #33
Post A Reply Post New Topic In Our Sky Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Ivy Rose
Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2004-09-27 06:28 PM



You shimmer in the sunlight
like splinters of glass, as little prisms
that reflect the Sun. I reach into the blue
to pull a piece of you from the azure sky,
from the wisps on a cloud-strewn day.

You soar past my love-filled eyes
carried on the wings of a powerful Eagle.
I chase after you seated upon
the snow-white wings of a Dove.
We meet in the tango of Love's fanciful flight.

Our spirits dance in tandem
beneath the Moon of forbidden love.
We are the phantoms of the night
that sing our love notes to the stars,
that know within that this love is truly right.

You shimmer just like the sunshine.
I bask in your warmth and your glow.
All the tenderness that is you is beyond divine.
I kiss your ruby lips that delight me so,
and get lost in the illusion of love through time.



© Copyright 2004 Ivy Rose - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
1 posted 2004-09-27 06:41 PM


Hey you...cut me a piece of that sky, I always need a little more heaven to replace the piece's I lose along the way...

Enjoyed, my friend...

jwesley

DavePage
Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-09-27 06:47 PM


This is incredibly beautiful

This is something you read.

Dave

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2004-09-27 09:19 PM


very pretty
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2004-09-29 12:29 PM


Nice...James
Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
5 posted 2004-09-29 10:34 AM


IvyRose~
My face smiled to see your name here ... then my heart *sighed* at the beautiful thoughts you laid on the pages blue~

Have I told you that I am thankfully blessed that you are a poetess ?
Well ... I am~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-09-29 11:00 AM


Oh my....this is SO beautiful!!!
Very much enjoyed this keeper.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

7 posted 2004-09-29 11:08 AM


absolutely lovely, my only words are
My oh my...

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
8 posted 2004-09-29 11:45 AM


No doubt, one of my favorites of yours. Just enchanting ...

Love, Margherita

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #33 » In Our Sky

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary