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Forbidden Dance
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Forbidden Dance |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Forbidden Dance I did a dance, desires floor Adagio of pain and awe A step of longing, lose and grope Each step an echo of my hope And low an Angel took my hand In spite the sin that I demand And gave to me a glories day A gift beyond my price to pay And now I gorse in sorrows sauce Contusions of desires course The heartbreak of a foolish sate Without a way to compensate The cruel is that I knew damn well This fool had but a one-way dwell And thus in weakness I fell shy I lived the phantom of a lie What penance can I give this dove? Except my hearts undying love |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! Your hearts undying love is the greatest gift to give. Loved this morning's write. All the best to you and yours. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~  ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Morning hugs, to you Mr. T.! I often listen to Adagio meditative music and it does soothe pains and fills me with awe and hope. If you were to take this "angel's" hand, I would give unto you, countless days of glory! For no sin commited by a sonneteering poet of God could block the Light of which you are so deserving.  "And thus in weakness I fell shy I lived the phantom of a lie" ~ Words from a humble man who perhaps is not fully aware of his worth. Nor is he expected to be perfect! We are all works in progress. No penance is needed to give to the dove of love. May you sway gently to adagio wrapped in the loving wings of your love dove. Love & God's Light, EA P.S.That poem rocked, Sigh Guy! lol  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Kind of you to understand.  Earth Angel, What other answer could I expect form an Angel. Twice blessed.  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
reminding me of the ripple effect, and how many lives we effect, in a good way, or a not so good way, which could forever tarnish a believing soul...believing that all of us has been on the receiving end and giving end of this...either way, it could be very very damaging. A very good reminder Sy...of the lives we so effect....we are all brothers/sisters Love to you my poet friend.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ It is true and good morning to you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I did a dance, desires floor Adagio of pain and awe A step of longing, lose and grope Each step an echo of my hope And low an Angel took my hand In spite the sin that I demand And gave to me a glories day A gift beyond my price to pay And now I gorse in sorrows sauce Contusions of desires course The heartbreak of a foolish sate Without a way to compensate The cruel is that I knew damn well This fool had but a one-way dwell And thus in weakness I fell shy I lived the phantom of a lie ==================================== Well...I'll still dance with you.  We can use the awesome cadence and meter of this write to be our poetic two-step music. Your rhymes rock read aloud Sy...as does your vocab....and as always the humilty of your words reach and teach. Hope you and Issy are safe and dry. Just wanted to do a mothy fly by and say hi. and winkie winkie too. lol |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sy .... everytime I read one of your inspires, I am awed by what you write. And you share that 'undying love' with all here. Blessings and smiles, Marti When women are depressed they either eat or go shopping. Men invade another country. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Excellent Dave |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Me thinks that particular penance helps heal a lot of wounds, me friend, when given faithfully. great write... jimmy |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The penance is a given when the heart is pure in it's journey and in this you reflect the pureness masterfully. A true treat to read and as always, excellent penning from you. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Re-read and now truely understood Dave |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dave, Thank you my friend. Mark, Your answer was a treat to read. jimmy, I understand. Marti, You are a dear. JM, I wrote you already so I won't repeat. My the bird of happiness live in your house and lay an egg. LOL |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
good mornin sir  excellant |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES You are kind, thank you. |
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