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Suetang
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0 posted 2004-09-26 06:19 PM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * *

I am drawn towards your love
Like a moth to a flame
Love flows throughout my being
As we become one and the same

The passion within your kiss
Lingers on my upturned mouth
Feelings of deep desire
Gently move from north to south

As you move your body closer
You whisper words of love so true
Driven to the peaks of passion
I declare my love for you

You are my object of affection
Our love will stand the test of time
As I express my love for you
Through these words of rhyme

* * *

"Love is the master of all ceremonies"
- Sue Tancheff

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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1 posted 2004-09-26 07:18 PM


Sue

And I thought I was always practising.

Nice evocative read

Dave

Susan
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2 posted 2004-09-26 08:06 PM


Beautiful as always, Sue.  True romance.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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Gaia
3 posted 2004-09-26 09:53 PM



and I bow
to the Master of Ceremonies

Love

an enjoyable write, Sue!

SmartChick
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4 posted 2004-09-26 11:54 PM


Beautiful Sue. Absolutely beautiful.
Mon Cherie
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5 posted 2004-09-27 10:53 AM


This is sweet, beautiful and loving! Much enjoyed...

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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6 posted 2004-09-27 10:59 AM


Suetang
You weave a gossamer web. Beautiful

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