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soul drifter
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since 2004-09-08
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0 posted 2004-09-26 03:43 PM


Green Eyes

My love in the skies
my love in the day
the stars align behind your eyes
shining night blue
showing me a way
back into you
green, green, green eyes

Half empty bed and a cold park bench
I am inhabiting these places
writing my longing for you on cafe napkins
I am sending you roses and lace
in the morning when the chilly blue air
tiptoes up your fire escape
you will find reminders of me there
and what will you think of me then

my love in the words
I love to write about you
the sun shines on me and the birds
shining afternoon bright
guiding me back to you
back into the light
of your green, green, green
green eyes

Half full teacup and a cold April day
I am inhabiting empty places
writing my songs for you on the clouds
sending you poor sketches of your face
in the night when the dark violet breeze
crawls to you in your bed
you will find reminders of my pleas
and what will you think of me then

my love in your world
my love I left with you
let the moon shine over this girl
shining how I feel
pulling the waves in to you
back into what's real
back into your spring green
green, green, green eyes

the love I left with you
shining in green eyes

"Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey

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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

1 posted 2004-09-26 04:14 PM


Reminds me of a few things.

Nice

Dave

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