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Michael G
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0 posted 09-25-2004 10:21 PM       View Profile for Michael G   Email Michael G   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Michael G's Home Page   View IP for Michael G

To remember the time is nothing, not
that I could forget, but it is nothing to bring it back. Fall is here and a last ride to the mountains has me at the momment once again. I left, driving away to a future so unlike anything I could feel. I drove away and found myself in unfamiliar places. Mountains high enough to obscure my heart, wide enough that the wind was transformed there. Traveling in its embrace of beauty I cryed as the enfant does, for my heart once again burst and nothing could regain it. Now here I am, years later and new location, still clinging to those mountains, still wanting there embrace, only to find that it was you, your touch that has kept me alive all these years.


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Suetang
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1 posted 09-25-2004 10:34 PM       View Profile for Suetang   Email Suetang   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suetang

Absolutely beautiful, Michael.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Susan
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walking the surreal


2 posted 09-26-2004 01:50 AM       View Profile for Susan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan

Mmmmm, yes.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

DavePage
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3 posted 09-26-2004 10:42 AM       View Profile for DavePage   Email DavePage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DavePage

You say words but the meaning seems to cry, these arn't the words I meant.

Yes it is a good evocative write but you seem to be almost writing against yourself.

dave
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light


4 posted 09-26-2004 10:49 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

"Mountains high enough to obscure my heart, wide enough that the wind was transformed there."

~ These wonderfully expressive lines were especially moving for me.


EA
Jenn E
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5 posted 06-25-2005 03:28 AM       View Profile for Jenn E   Email Jenn E   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jenn E

That was simply beautiful MG
As Always
Jenn E
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Realm of Supernatural


6 posted 10-27-2007 05:34 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

more beautiful then anything

ARCTIC WIND
 
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