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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-09-25 06:55 PM


Luscious My Love

You look delicious my love,
succulent my love,
luscious my love.
I could drink you
like cool chocolate
milk in the morning.
Partaking of your
succulent honey
with no provocation,
no warning.
I'm hungry my love,
starving for the taste
of your luscious love.

JamesLee
September25
2004

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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2004-09-26 05:19 PM


Well James, this one should get her attention.  Nice write.
DavePage
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2 posted 2004-09-26 05:31 PM


Funny I should be listening to Barry Manilow singing about his levi's going tight

An apple going jean

Evocative write, maybe right

Dave

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2004-09-27 05:53 PM


Thank you Mark and Dave...appreciate the responses...James
Temptress
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4 posted 2004-09-28 01:34 AM


sweet as usual from you, James. I love that your poetry is so romantic.

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill


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5 posted 2004-09-29 08:13 AM


yes a true romantic


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