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A Poem... |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
I think that maybe I will write, A poem short, not deep but light, I think perhaps four lines will do, And then I’ll stop, ‘cause I’ll be through. Addendum But what I ask will be my theme? It must be good, or it will seem, That I am doodling with nada to do, My fingers lost in Passion's blue. Addendum to addendum O what the heck, I must admit, All here alone does this guy sit, My wife is out, went to the store, I didn't go, 'cause I'm a bore. Final addendum When will the football game commence? So I can end this dread pretense, Of penning poems grand with rhyme, And quit wasting all this time. Epilogue For anyone who takes the time, To read this bit of fluff filled rhyme, I apologize for my endeavor, I wish I could have been more clever. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cute... sometimes we just need brevity |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
whether it be doodle on pad, keyboard, or on a fridge with those little magnets, sometimes we just go to go outside the box. Good humor piece and brought a smile. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Difficult to comment, you sound like you want to write and structure, but bored, which either makes it very accurate on people writing or discriminating. I liked the effect. Dave |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Tim, it's amazing what comes out of too much time on our hands, good thing you stayed home and did what Mark said  Very clever indeed. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Tim If giving me a smile was the aim of this you wrote then you have the winning poem and you also get my vote |
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