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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-09-25 11:38 AM


Inspired by an Irish Folk Song sung by the Clancy Brothers and Tommy Maken

The very direct version of my words.

Dave

An autumn wind laments around
The love of your heart
And peace is never in your heart
Or loving treasure strewn
Though autumn winds may swoop and die
Your heart still stands unmoved
As icy winds grip your veins
My smile to you is chewed
Take time, take time in your mind
And the gardens that you roam
Take peace, take peace
Take bread and water
My loving treasure strewn
Though autumn winds may swoop and die
A love of mine alone
Singing hushalulalulalula
Singing hushalulalulalula

Take time take time take time
And find
In the gardens that you roam
Take peace take peace
Take bread and water
My loving treasure strewn
Thugh autumn winds may swoop and die
A bird of love alone
Singing hushalulalulalula
Singing hushalulalulalula

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Martie
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1 posted 2004-09-25 11:51 AM


Dave

"Take time take time take time
And find
In the gardens that you roam
Take peace take peace"

A song can come along
and like the wind sweep clean the sky
and make of human heart
a lullaby.

Beautiful!

DavePage
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2 posted 2004-09-25 12:03 PM


Thanks

I just wish I had written the original.

Dave

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3 posted 2004-09-25 12:59 PM


nice one
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4 posted 2004-09-26 10:13 AM


Thanks Passing

Appreciated

Dave

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