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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
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My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-09-25 02:11 AM


What is this feeling I feel?
Oh how my head does reel.
What is this longing I sense?
Past lives from my hands I rinse.
This feeling I feel is real,
With truth spoken lick the seal.
The longing I do is for you,
I know you feel it too.
With your love given to me,
I can now clearly see.
I belong right by your side,
On clouds we shall glide.
You bring new meaning to me,
I know not how to make you see.
You're the reason I wake up now,
Bring me to life this is how.
Love me,
Never leave me,
Believe me,
Don't lie to me,
An angel that whispered into my ear,
All your words I love to hear.
YOU...are my new meaning.

One cannot see what lies within if one does not see the obvious

© Copyright 2004 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279

1 posted 2004-09-25 06:39 AM


Fist time I have read you. Love the poem...picture of you is way cool too. LOL!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-09-25 06:43 AM


It is wonderful when one finds love.  Just remember, love yourself too, as she loves you - a gift you can give to her.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-09-25 09:45 AM


big smile here
DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

4 posted 2004-09-25 11:56 AM


Wishing, hoping, praying

Liked it

Dave

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri
5 posted 2004-09-27 10:45 AM


Do I gotta BEAT it out of you boy-of-mine? Who is this new love for you?
Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
6 posted 2004-09-28 09:18 AM


thanks everyone....mother you couldnt beat me if ya tried id just stick out my arm and you couldnt reach me anymore :P

One cannot see what lies within if one does not see the obvious

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