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Dancing on a long night
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Dancing on a long night |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Dancing on a long night Wined with thoughts and dreams Unfulfilled seeing red My life an orb Kisses the world Walking through a long day Danced with sand and grass A day has lived to see me My life strands of gold to kiss the world Sleeping through a long day Memories of heaven Fulfilled remembering Kisses in my dreams Of heaven |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
A nice peaceful sleep I assume..Very nice sim0riah Only at night you can see the depth of the sun |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I enjoyed this  Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Snickering at Susan. It looks like you and I are the only two awake right now! I too like this poem Dave. The title is great and weds itself to the verse well. Bravo! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderfully done Dave Kev, I'm awake too  |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
sim0riah Out like a light after sun rise. Susan Thanks EvocativeVerse2 You got my age right. Thanks for comments. passing shadows Thanks I did deliberately do in tongue in cheek since there are nights and days when you feel so high on just a night that reality seems to be something that should fold around you, rather than the real way. Dave |
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