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Even When the Sun is Gone
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Even When the Sun is Gone |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Even When the Sun is Gone Somewhere, there are gray skies leaden down with rain but I know that the sun is around and it will peek out once again Somewhere, there are clouds of white rushing through on high and a little bit of sunshine peeks down from the sky Somewhere, buildings will cast shadows on the crowd below but a simple ray of sunshine lifts their spirits so Somewhere, one is in a room replete with no windows, shades are drawn where one feels so incomplete their only hope, the coming dawn Just know, even if the sun doesn't seem to be casting down its lighted beams the sun can still be there with you in what you think, in what you do If you are one, who lives without the sun for a day, or two, just know in your heart that words can act like beaming rays with good reading the shadows depart So find joy in your write, and all that you are find special ways to impart it, like shining stars Starting today, I will be in and out and around but not as I start a hectic, but eagerly anticipated, schedule. Sometimes you'll see me, sometimes you won't... but I know you will all leave for me upon my return some marvelous sharings of your heart for me to read and ponder over upon my homecoming. Hugs to all of you lovely poets...keep the home fires burning, yes?  Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-24-2004 10:38 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Good write and I will miss you dearly.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I will keep your warm and beautiful smile within my heart, looking for the sunrays to peek in every now and then. Sunny and loving poem! Wishing you to remain calm through the hectic days. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
the sun is always there-thank you for the reminder. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Sunshine I love your words but the smaller ones I read from a distance of 2 foot with the keyboard extended. Can you go for a bigger font on the more imaginative lines for us poor old souls who need to sit up straight. Dave |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and we are always here when the sun decides to peak in... The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
The sun never goes for long -- and some clouds, even a little rain, can be a nice change even here in Southern California. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
. . . and when you leave, a few rays of sunshine go with you. Hugs, Robert |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hurry back!  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karilea, I love this poem. Infact, I think it's one of my favorites. And, I will miss you, SunshineyOne. You will still just be an email away from me, won't you? I sure do hope so. Hugs, my friend Ethel |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I will miss reading you when you are out...tremendously....but hope that your outings are very positive happenings for you...and if the opportunity presents itself, please take pics for us when you can...love to you and yours and thank you for this lovely write.... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
and somewhere there is a ray of alphabet riding westerly winds to the darkened illuminatons of floral valleys waiting for the embrace of radiance. As always, you express thoughts in a style and grace all your own. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
What a nice going away poem you have given us sto keep us warm while you are gone. It goes straight to my library! Enjoy the time and plans you have when you are away. Have fun! `luv and hugs, miscellanea |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Did it again! I've got to get more sleep!Where are those toothpicks when you need them? THIS time, I'll check the library box. Oh, who doesn't mind an extra bump once in a while anyway! Now, the poem will be securely submitted to my library. Yes! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you for this write homefires kept burning, yes |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Even I, who love the dark, welcome the return of the sun. Say it ain't so, Kari... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Karilea Your words always bring a little ray of sunshine into our lives to warm our hearts and soothe our souls. This was a most beautiful write from a lovely lady who is admired by so many. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 return when you can and KNOW you will be soooo missed warmth and all...~~*~~ |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
We'll definitely look forward to your return... Take care! _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Take Care Sunshine. Keep up the beautiful writing. ~*Krista Lee Knutson*~ |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Miss you already! and then He created the horse... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I think this means more to me because I haven't been around much lately... but when I'm here, there are always gifts waiting... many from you. *S* Have fun, Sunshiney One... *S* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
.....Missing you ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Hoping you're having a wonderful trip dear lady |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
You will be missed but your return anxiously anticipated. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Hi Lady! Enjoy your trip, the weather out here is fantastic (well a bit of rain in the northern forecast for the weekend, but probably not down south). Enjoyed these uplifting words of yours, as I always do. Will be thinking of you! Corinne |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Scorpio's right....but today is the day you were particularly missed by this poet. I wish I'd seen a fresh ray of Sunshine today. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..be safe..enjoy..don't stop writing..Sunshine in our hearts.. sp -------- |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Loved your words - be safe and travel well Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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