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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2004-09-24 06:52 AM


Little words grin
Martyrs finding friends
Little words step in
Beauty protesting knotted string
Hanging colorful secret languages
Barrels running over with
Sliced white peaches
Dripping peonies
Dating euphoria’s raw nerves
Low necklines blush
Wagging bloodlust
Ohhhh this
Picasso in their pockets
Planting flowers in their eyes
Paper curled rosettes
Winking something nice
Evergreen eye shadow
Wisps of scented hair
Leans forward on window sills
Warm red lipstick
Calling up childhood
Dozing on a power line
First love climbs a skyline
Reflections in a stream
Opus nightshift definitely convinces
Pictures inside their heads
Is a lifetime guarantee
And oh those little words grin
And grin
And grin
Right with the plaster of visions
Hot deals never need to search
Lining their decks with red skies
Twisting and dancing
Unto opened doors of light
Hop…skip…jump
Blond-haired lovers
Write a brand new opera
Declaring an Africa Hot Summer


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ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
1 posted 2004-09-24 07:17 AM


Applause!!
Loved the ending, well done, Lee J...:-)
enjoyed
--------ice
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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2004-09-24 07:28 AM


sounds like a bit of heaven captured one sweet day

First love climbs a skyline
pricesless treasure of a line you penned
(wish it were mine.........lol)

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2004-09-24 07:47 AM


Again I see the ballet! Dancing words  .... and the choreographer does a magnificent job!
Love, Margherita

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2004-09-24 08:06 AM


blond hair lovers
can see them glint to invisible
with the sun behind

enjoyed it ms LJ

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2004-09-24 08:12 AM


LeeJ
Which way did the hurricane turn. LOL
Strong winds. Good morning

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
6 posted 2004-09-24 08:21 AM


Congratulations, maestro! ~ Or is that maestra?

You have conducted another fine symphony of musical moments!

BIG HUG!
Linda

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