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time prophet
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In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

0 posted 2004-09-24 05:12 AM



It’s not an earthquake
that makes me shake,
but a yearning
to feel your hand in mine,
learning,
to watch the sun rise
in a land
other than mine.

Perhaps in time
not only hands
but hearts
will entwine
learning
to watch the sun rise
in the lands
of yours and mine.

© Copyright 2004 Frank Bennett - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-09-24 06:21 AM


togetherness is a great and powerful venture
Enjoyed

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2004-09-24 06:22 AM


Soft and beautiful!
And holding a great promise...
Love, Margherita

Susan
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walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-09-24 02:55 PM


Wistful and lovely -

Susan

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2004-09-24 06:48 PM


beautiful thoughts~

M

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-09-24 08:40 PM


perhaps
Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2004-09-29 11:50 AM


beautiful thoughts of togetherness. very well done.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
7 posted 2004-09-29 02:35 PM


Frank~
This conjures up scenes of sheer beauty~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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