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Lonely Shadow
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since 2000-03-14
Posts 128
Virginia

0 posted 2004-09-23 04:38 PM


god’s precious gift
sent from heaven
blessing this lowly poet
with her loving presence
her beauty beyond compare
the light from her loving heart
shining down upon all
who are lucky enough
to cross her path
my heart is open for all to see
wanting to show you the truth
of what light you have given
to this lonely shadow
you’ve filled my once cold heart
with such warmth and love
the pain which plagued me so
melting away like ice in spring
oh if you could see through my eyes
if only for one moment
you would not believe
the true beauty that I see
that lies with your loving heart
such a precious gift you are
I would no dare trade each moment
Not for gold or precious gems
I am grateful that I found you
My dear precious angel
And I pray the god above
That he’ll let me stay
In the heaven of your presence
And truly know the wonders
That lie within you
Please let me stay here
Let me stay with you

Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death.

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-09-23 04:55 PM


Beautiful expression of your love..
Very much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-09-23 07:17 PM


Very loving - I think she would appreciate this greatly

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2004-09-23 07:19 PM


this would touch any woman's heart
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2004-09-23 07:49 PM


Nice...very nice...James
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