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Open Poetry #33

Sublimation

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

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0 posted 2004-09-23 11:58 AM

Sublimation

Cloistered inside the thin, grey, sensorial mesh
of a screen porch,
he offered his thoughts, first,
through the ruled but intimate context
of a small prayer book. Hunched by the subject
about which his pen whispered,
at page end he stood and stretched
with ritual relief. Before turning to his correspondence
his eyes considered the width of a path
as it curved into the lush undergrowth.

RMW

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

1 posted 2004-09-23 12:27 PM

Bob

A moment in time, well described!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-09-23 12:41 PM

Wonderful imagery!
Great to read you again!
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-09-23 01:44 PM

The quiet time of meld...
Robert, you've been missed.
Welcome home!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

4 posted 2004-09-23 05:35 PM

I can just picture it, Bob

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

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walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-09-23 07:20 PM

I like this, the portrait of a mere moment - nice.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

6 posted 2004-09-23 09:32 PM

Martie, Enchantress, Sunshine, M, and Susan ..... Thank you, ladies, one and all. You are most kind. Bob

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