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garysgirl
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0 posted 2004-09-22 11:40 PM


The gentle breezes of the wind
whispering in my ear
Sunset, sunrise or a cloud
seeming to be so near

A smile upon a baby's face
or a little bird singing in a tree
My little dog running and playing
or a butterfly who flies free

The moon, stars, and velvet sky
the sunshine or rain falling to the ground
Colors of flowers of every kind
with their fragrance all around

Found within all these
are written words of poetry
And right there in the midst of all
you and your love I clearly see

Your voice I hear whispering
as in ear I hear the breeze
We are happy as the butterfly free
and birds singing in the trees

Our love beautiful as the velvet skies
has warmth of glow of sunshine
And peaceful as sound of falling rain
in knowing I am yours and you are mine

© Copyright 2004 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-09-23 12:17 PM


"I See" ~ and I like what I see! A sweet poem by sweetie pie Ethel Mae! Gosh, I've been missing you ~ and thinking about you!

Lovely poem by lovely you!

HUGE HUG,
Linda xo

Susan
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2 posted 2004-09-23 12:31 PM


Lovely and loving - sweet necture to the heart.

Nice to read you again-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Larry C
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3 posted 2004-09-23 12:45 PM


Ethel,
It doesn't get richer then that. Nicely done.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

LeeJ
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4 posted 2004-09-23 09:16 AM


this entire poem was spiritually inspirational...especially the last line where belief is the total jewel...you go girl!
froggy
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5 posted 2004-09-23 11:42 AM


One word........Beautiful I Like it.
Thats three words no matter its beautiful,
I really do like it.

:-)

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6 posted 2004-09-23 11:49 AM


Ethel this is loving lovely! yes...you see the words, and write for us the poetry.
thank you.
Am glad to see you here today, have missed your smile terribly so.  HUGS

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

NewEnglandlazurlu
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7 posted 2004-09-23 11:56 AM


Hi Ethel, you've been on my mind and I'm so happy to see you here. I hope you did not sustain too much damage from Ivan.

I liked this poem ....

hugs, Marti

When women are depressed they either eat or go shopping. Men invade another country.
                    -Elayne Boosler-

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8 posted 2004-09-23 12:40 PM


Ethel!  It's so good to see you and read you once again!
You have been missed dear lady!
~Hugs & Love, Nancy~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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9 posted 2004-09-23 01:21 PM


Love is all around when it's true!

~sky

So you go and make it happen
Do your best, just keep on laughing
It's all on you, there's always a brand new day. -Avril Lavigne

Ericc
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10 posted 2004-09-23 01:54 PM


Beautiful!

Eric

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11 posted 2004-09-23 08:50 PM


yes...beautiful
Rdz9
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12 posted 2004-09-25 01:13 AM


Beautiful is not nearly a great enough word to describe it... yet I have no others.
-Rob

One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world...

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