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sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
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Wyoming USA

0 posted 2004-09-22 04:25 PM



Beautiful snow covered mountains
Flowing streams and forests thick
Parts untouched by souls of Nike
Creatures living within the sticks

A touching song from wind and birds
Bellowing from the trees
No traffic here from cars and people
Just the motion of a breeze

Isn't it strange people say it's the wild
As they fight through our social disease
To me it's a beautiful place of magic
That I like to call peace

sim0riah

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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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1 posted 2004-09-22 04:43 PM


Good words Sim

Dave

Having destroyed their Urban residences
So they can not face living there
They go Rural

Amd the first thing the do
The concrete warriors

Is make it a place
They would not wish to live in

Dave


Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-09-22 06:16 PM


Oh, you make me want to go back home to my cabin on the hill and the isolation from so called civilizaation, sitting there in the hand of God.  What balm it was to leave work each day and find the forest awaiting me.  Thanks for the brief step back into Heaven.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-09-22 06:49 PM


I visit there now and then

good write!

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4 posted 2004-09-24 12:06 PM


Boy do I know this question, living on a mountain.  I look down on cars that look like marching ants.  Very nicely done.
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