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Stars Of Your Own
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Stars Of Your Own |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Stars Of Your Own (for Martie, on her birthday) Stars count for something That’s the rumor anyway; so they say, I don’t believe it. and think that where the world’s a mass the world is in orbit around a star; when you’re born gravity tells your fortune says who you’ll be, if you stumble or a crane tells your fortune. should drop the grand piano. You do have a sign, I know this: but not one in we are spirit the Zodiac; and spirits are eternal; this is your sign, there’s no birth day, your constellation, no birthdays ever the defining statement and no death to fear. of your presence here: and yes, I know your sign: You were born under the sun and the north star; one a steady, steadfast guide and inspiration, one that brings our daily light and warmth. Those are the stars that formed you, and no others. [This message has been edited by James_A_Fraser (09-23-2004 10:43 AM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jamie How beautiful this is...thank you for such a special word gift!  |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
My what a lovely poem for Martie, and sometimes I think you may indeed be right! She is indeed not only a star, but a very bright one to guide us all here in her craft, and kindness. Again, Happy Birthday to Martie, and let's all wish this to be her best year ever okay? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
And this, my friend, is just ONE of the reasons I think YOU ARE SPECIAL~ 'You were born under the sun and the north star; one a steady, steadfast guide and inspiration, one that brings our daily light and warmth. Those are the stars that formed you, and no others.' ~To give so freely of your loving care, to wrap the stars around our Martie in celebrate of her life ... not measured in just one day ... but for the ALL OF HER~ Thank YOU~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a beautiful, loving gift this is! *S* I know this: we are spirit and spirits are eternal; there’s no birth day, no birthdays ever and no death to fear. Your dual voices blend with perfection... but some lines are particularly breathtaking... these went straight to the heart. *S* |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Jamie, this is just precious. Such a beautiful gift for our Martie  Maree Well I see you doing, What I try to do for me, With the words from a poet, And a voice from a choir, And a melody, nothing else matters. ~Stevie Nicks |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
J darling man this is such a melding of wonder, what a fabulous gift to give someone for their birthday. You are a true delight and this is pure starlight, I love it utterly, utterly, utterly How you manage to combine the duel voices in this into a complete wonder is a mystery to me, I only know that its makes one of those special poems that will stay in my memory for a long time. Truly outstanding darling man. as always Mushy    Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is precious! |
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