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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-09-22 08:04 AM



valley girl double barrel
rock smart second generation
with her mom and aunts sister
in the bimmer with parking pass class

they shop the thrift store wednesdays
when it is 25% off the cheap
and discounts for seniors
and boy scouts and veterens too

but if you bring the beach bag
you can steal swim suits
to wear at the rhino
where the men have paws

and jaguar grease under their nails
_____
Dark

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-09-22 08:59 AM


as always, it is a pleasure to see you in there and the rite of passage into your thoughts...good good morning to you, sending wishes for a wonderful day with hugs

Lee J.

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

2 posted 2004-09-22 09:33 AM


love how your bring your observations
of life
to life
in my head

K

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2004-09-22 09:48 AM


love the juxtaposition of images you sketch
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2004-09-22 09:49 AM


What...no notes on observations?
Clearly, you see with glass eyes...
This was great!

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
5 posted 2004-09-22 10:02 AM


Aha - you paint a vivid and insightful picture.  As far as the jaguar goes, purrrrr, keep the paw paw boys and give me the car!

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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