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Open Poetry #33

Consciousness

Joe Houck
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 324
california

0 posted 2004-09-22 02:23 AM

Consciousness

Out of order,
Resonance of residence long past,
An empty library,
No sight that shines on clarity,
A fangless rapture,
Kleptic grip, hands big and small,
Wilted garden, free of association,
Impervious bells, harmonic inconsistency,
Not lost,
Not conscious.

"The worst vice is advice" (Al Pacino, devil's advocate)

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2004-09-22 04:43 AM

Hi, Joe! Welcome back! Hope all has been well with you!

~ an intriguing write on conscious unconsciousness! ~ Or is it a fascinating write on unconcious consciousness! lol

Either way, you got my unconscious blue matter (or is that my conscious gray matter?!?

)working overtime!

Warm, welcoming back hugs,
EA

nn
Member

since 2000-09-18

Posts 75

2 posted 2004-09-22 06:23 AM

I liked it!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-09-22 07:05 AM

Hello and thank you for the powerful write and read...especially liked

A fangless rapture,
Kleptic grip, hands big and small,
Wilted garden, free of association,
Impervious bells, harmonic inconsistency,

tremendous visuals!

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