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Snowflake From Hell
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0 posted 09-22-2004 01:17 AM       View Profile for Snowflake From Hell   Email Snowflake From Hell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Snowflake From Hell

Untill the day I die...
I give my heart to you,
It's somethin I need to do.
Untill the day I die...
No longer will I be a fool,
Or drown in this tear made pool.
Untill the day I die...
This is something I need to say,
To be sure you won't go away.
Untill the day I die...
I give my all to you and stand proud,
I confess my heart soul and love for you out loud.
Untill the day I die...
I can't sleep properly anymore now,
A queen you are so I shall bow.
Untill the day I die...
I give my all to you and stand,
Knowing you will never leave my hand.
Untill the day I die...
I will love you past all of this,
My ignorance and unrighteous bliss.
Untill the day I die...
Beyond the day that I die...


I owe you at least this much

One cannot see what lies within if one does not see the obvious

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MGROVES
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1 posted 09-22-2004 02:30 AM       View Profile for MGROVES   Email MGROVES   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MGROVES

wow  awesome writing m'friend  glad i stopped by. really liked this

Earth Angel
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2 posted 09-22-2004 05:03 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Now that is what I'd call undying love!

A stirring and impassioned write. You certainly are hot, Flakes!

A love like that endures into eternity!


EA
Copperbell
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3 posted 09-22-2004 10:11 AM       View Profile for Copperbell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Copperbell

so sweet - I hope you enjoy many blessings
Paula Finn
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4 posted 09-22-2004 12:44 PM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paula Finn

So tell me boyo...who is she?
passing shadows
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5 posted 09-22-2004 10:20 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

what a strong feeling!
MGROVES
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6 posted 10-01-2005 06:48 AM       View Profile for MGROVES   Email MGROVES   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MGROVES

thought id check this one out again lucky lady

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Artic Wind
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7 posted 10-27-2007 05:36 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

wow, very powerful

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