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Kahlil
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0 posted 2004-09-22 01:00 AM


let the world spin my face from the sun...

let the spirit leaves turn in the fall...

I pirouette in autumn dance



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mrmojorisin5908
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Colorado
1 posted 2004-09-22 02:04 AM


WOW! i really like this poem. For some reason i connect with it---and those three little lines really gets me thinking. Wonderfully done man. I can't wait for your next piece.

"I'm a spy in the house of love...I know your deepest darkest fear."

Andrew A.
"While public funds evaporate in feasts of fraternity, a bell of rosy fire rings in the clouds."

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2004-09-22 02:20 AM


*grinning here, K*
cool
totally cool

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2004-09-22 05:06 AM


~ need I say more?

Okay, I will! This is a jewel of a write and you are pure gold! This put a smile on my face and in my heart.

Love and Light,
EA

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