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suthern
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0 posted 2004-09-21 04:59 PM


Sorry...

The title says it all.

[This message has been edited by suthern (09-22-2004 10:07 AM).]

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2004-09-21 05:09 PM


I'll be back for another read...

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2004-09-21 07:08 PM


Prayers cannot alter the fact
I’m not her


know this feeling well~~

M

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Gaia
3 posted 2004-09-21 07:20 PM


oh, those sad green thoughts that never seem to fade away
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4 posted 2004-09-21 09:40 PM


Trapped in a gilded cage
The door open for flight
To where
An image lives

Liked your words and understood them

Dave

Susan
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5 posted 2004-09-21 09:45 PM


Owie.  I understand this and in a few words you expressed such deep emotion -

  Susan

Should we ever compare ourselves to another and not be found wanting?  Perhaps to look in the mirror and love what we see is the best course.  When you figure out how to do this, let me know

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

suthern
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6 posted 2004-09-22 09:50 AM


Sunshine: Brave soul... Once was enough for me and I wrote it! LOL

nakdthoughts & Midnitesun & Susan: Thank you so much for reading, kind ladies... and for understanding!

Dave: That's so beautiful it justifies my poem's temporary existence! *S* Thank you so very much!!

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