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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2004-09-21 04:17 PM



Soft filtered sunlight.

Autumn's glow shining through dew.

More chances to bloom.

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
sim0riah
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1 posted 2004-09-21 04:22 PM


Very nicely said..

sim0riah

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

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2 posted 2004-09-21 05:26 PM


Gave me an idea . . . thanks.

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3 posted 2004-09-21 05:35 PM



Spun webs of moonlight

Autumn's glow shining through another you.

More chances to bloom.

Dave

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4 posted 2004-09-21 05:39 PM




sim THANK YOU!

Krawdad, glad to inspire, thanks for the reply!

Dave, wow, another inspired one. THANKS!


kayjay
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5 posted 2004-09-21 05:54 PM


Sunlight beckoning
Raindrops evaporating
Autumn warmth blissful in splendor

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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6 posted 2004-09-21 05:58 PM


Can you see this big grin?
Thanks, KEN, for another delightful taste of autumn gold!

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7 posted 2004-09-21 06:12 PM


can I string a hammock across your poem and take a nap?  

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8 posted 2004-09-21 06:31 PM


ROTFL, yes, of course, Robert.
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9 posted 2004-09-21 07:10 PM


Yep, just an edge more summer filtered into autumn, giving us just a few more blooms. Enjoyed.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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10 posted 2004-09-21 07:12 PM


Thanks, gardening friend.
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