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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-09-21 03:26 PM


Sparks on a slow dance living your personality, your feeling, your essence, your desire, your movement, your feeling, you

Headed with the scent of you, fingers on me, enraptured, trapped with the smell of your hair, the beast held by you in check to dance on another world where



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Soleil Noir
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1 posted 2004-09-21 03:30 PM


Oh you rascal....
dropping off your thoughts
like that...

now my imagination can go anywhere!

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2 posted 2004-09-21 03:44 PM


Soleil

I will try to behave in future.

Dave

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3 posted 2004-09-21 07:23 PM


does get the imagination going


Snowflake From Hell
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4 posted 2004-09-22 01:22 AM


very nice really does get the imagination going

One cannot see what lies within if one does not see the obvious

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5 posted 2004-09-22 02:09 PM


As someone said

I like to leave an audience riveted.

thanks

Dave

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