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sim0riah
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0 posted 2004-09-21 01:59 PM


Every time I think of you
I can feel you by my side
And even though your miles away
This peace tells me I'm alright

A calming resolution
Eases my mind when in despair
And when the stars come out at night
I can feel you, flowing through the air

My only wish in life
Is to touch you once again
To feel your hands upon me
to touch your frail skin

Relive the love that we once had
Release the pain, wipe the tears away
I dream at night you're by my side
When I wake at the dawn of day

In my life I know this is true
I'm lost without you

So now I keep on dreaming
That tomorrow our fait will change
Our paths will cross again
And I'll here you call my name

And into these arms you'll run
As tears flow down my face
As everything turns motionless
A true loves embrace

And into these arms
My pain will be free
As long as you are by my side
I can again begin to believe

sim0riah

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2004-09-21 02:01 PM


Peace and contentment are found in these words.
Beautiful!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-09-21 03:08 PM


there is a hope of something wonderful in the air of your words..if you believe it, it will come....smiles and hugs....beautifully written and expressed.
DavePage
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3 posted 2004-09-21 03:18 PM


Sim

I liked the words but in these days was it romance, summer, winter.

The words are good but they didn't lead me to where you wanted someone to be.

Dave

sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
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4 posted 2004-09-21 03:27 PM


Thanks for responding and the comments Everyone

Dave I appreciate your critique and can see where you are coming from..I reread this one and Dance of desire and can definately see the difference

sim0riah


Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

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Gaia
5 posted 2004-09-21 04:28 PM


to cross paths again...
requires a willingness to take that first step beyond the wish  

MGROVES
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6 posted 2004-09-21 07:32 PM


this was beautiful and spoken from the heart. but no one knows less u let them know


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