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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-09-21 09:50 AM



Flexing

Fingers tired, hardly nimble
numbness but a motion away
performance worn
needing the kneading
to make lithe again.

But for the mind, ever ready
with a battery of thoughts
always, always on you
noted thoughts, mentally disposed
to ease the day
from a body, overused.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-09-21 09:55 AM


Time for a nice long hot soaky bath, with candles or incense burning, and a few hours of sleep maybe?
sim0riah
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2 posted 2004-09-21 10:33 AM


Sad but very nice...Maybe a glass of wine wit that bath and a massage afterwards

sim0riah

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

LeeJ
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3 posted 2004-09-21 11:21 AM


oh boy, this reminds me of the great massage I recieved last night, very first one, but I tell you true, it's worth every penny, cuz it leaves you with no thoughts, feeling like mush...talk about harmony, and at one with oneself...sheeeesh, it's an island paradise

Good write

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2004-09-21 12:15 PM


yes, now if I can only find the perfect masseuse

( don't laugh though, I work at Her Majesties Healers...where that is what they do although I don't benefit from it)
thanks..was a long weekend at the Renaissance Faire.

M

sim0riah
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5 posted 2004-09-21 12:49 PM


Ok, Ok, If I gotta I will donate my services..But I warn you, Most women can't stop at just one.... ....LOL

sim0riah

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2004-09-21 01:17 PM


~smiling~ at your response, Sim0riah

M

DavePage
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7 posted 2004-09-21 03:31 PM


You are always good

Dave

Soleil Noir
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8 posted 2004-09-21 03:33 PM


performance worn
needing the kneading
to make lithe again.

~*~

Oh, the thoughts between
the lines of need...

sim0riah
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9 posted 2004-09-21 04:16 PM


Right back at ya sweet!!

sim0riah

Robert Frazier
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10 posted 2004-09-21 06:21 PM


you are good...even with tired fingers!

Rf

E S West
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11 posted 2004-09-21 06:29 PM


fingers do take a lot.. well done.. E S West

"always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.."
" Ignorance is the root of all evil "

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