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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-09-20 03:46 PM


Ain't got no trousers
And no where to go
Flying in the air
Socks as they sew

Got home early
Just the wrong day
I was only sleeping on grass
I wasn't on hay

And now
I'm on hey
See that suitcase
Bottom of the hall

Stand back for the rest
Cos it's about to fall
Wouldn't want to hurt you
Hit you in the brain

You might start thinking
And that would be a shame


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Pilgrimage
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1 posted 2004-09-20 03:54 PM


I like the blues.  Even the funny ones.  I like this one, kind of snide and sly.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

DavePage
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2 posted 2004-09-20 04:23 PM


Part of a mispent youth, when I could mispend it.

Thanks Nan

Dave

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3 posted 2004-09-20 04:33 PM


LOL... Oh lordie... those last two lines could so easily be for me. *S* Well done! *S*
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4 posted 2004-09-22 02:19 PM


suthern

I was thinking of the Blues Brothers when they end up down the stairs.

Brain in gear and no other comment.

Dave

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