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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2004-09-20 09:59 AM


Buzzed on Jurassic Park themes
Cement plastered
Burning at the stake & signaling
Writing resignation from a palm tree

Swashbuckling Star gates
Throwing gems in deep forgotten hollows
Head on your feet train
With a deep space radar
Hammering together a future
If you don’t dwell on destination
Or a first class ticket there….

Schoolboys tease, sitting on hands
Calling out to the midnight moon
Loved on one level, bulging on others
Eros showcased premise forms
Fast track success, co exists
Clinking together black and white trim
The six digit glue pot of a
Blood stained sidewalk
Proposing euphoric music boxes
Flooding with scents of green night shirts
Caring for it, the best way we know how

Riding a bicycle to flea markets
Touching world gossip overflows
To a tan bosom of new money
Bottle caps turn into polished stone
While the odor of shake and bake fills the air
simple stuff, simple life,
buy ohhhhhh how exotic!


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miscellanea
Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
1 posted 2004-09-20 10:05 AM


Riding a bicycle to flea markets
Touching world gossip overflows
To a tan bosom of new money
Bottle caps turn into polished stone
While the odor of shake and bake fills the air
simple stuff, simple life,
buy ohhhhhh how exotic!

That mind of yours keeps me working and smiling!  Especially liked the bottle cap line!  Enjoyed.   Have a good day, Lee.

          miscellanea

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2004-09-20 10:51 AM


"Riding a bicycle to flea markets
Touching world gossip overflows"

~ An especially appealing vignette.

Another fascinating write, Loquacious Lee!

May your days be as interesting as your wonderful poetry!


Linda

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