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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-09-20 07:58 AM

morning is an ocean
with satin skin she shivers
her edges are at my eyes

my hands write poems there
at the soft dunes
I imagine them as her

under the sky covers
and there is laughter
where the dark stones talk

she comes to me then
and whispers damp songs
she says I am a boy

with the hands of a man
playing with an orange ball
and to leave it in her yard

while she puts on her undresses

___Dark

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-09-20 08:02 AM

ahhh dear man...you can sit by the ocean and write your words any day....
and leave me once again,
speechless...

you are truly at your best when your spirit muse blesses you...

I believe, today, you have been blessed....

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Daniel Storm
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 91
New York

2 posted 2004-09-20 09:19 AM

This is fine writing.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2004-09-20 09:26 AM

DarkStranger~
This is rich, rich, rich~

'my hands write poems there
at the soft dunes
I imagine them as her'

You play the sand-words softly~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

4 posted 2004-09-20 09:30 AM

Morning blushes well
when you ink her golden...

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-09-20 09:44 AM

A unified glory, raining smudges of painted entrances
Gasps of fluid trances longing for the first lilac of day
Painting invisible rings on our fingers and toes
Watercolors of tomorrow’s world
Seams like a river of eternity
An infinite loop
Created by even grounds of amber
Through your words

Good good morning, thank you for these long fingers of words

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

6 posted 2004-09-20 04:41 PM

Oh oh oh, I like this one. Clever, and sensual, with a feeling of innocence. I like it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2004-09-20 04:50 PM

Gosh, I leerrve the way you write.

Mxx

Well I see you doing, What I try to do for me, With the words from a poet, And a voice from a choir, And a melody, nothing else matters. ~Stevie Nicks

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